Spiralpool (for SW and TSW)

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  1. MarvelB0i

    MarvelB0i Notable Member

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    *If I submitted the map wrong then can someone help get it right by uploading the correct file or helping me make it correct*
    Here is my completed and new skywars map Spiralpool. :D
    Map name: Spiralpool
    Game: SW and TSW
    Built by:MarvelFanB0i
    IDK it took like 2 months to build but I took a break that was over a month in terms of making this map.
    This map will be very innovative for the server. Let’s look at how:
    It will be the first BrokenLens map to contain MAP ART!
    It also has waterlogged blocks in which there is half block tall water that will make for just as fast paced, but different and fun PVP!
    An interesting aesthetic!

    Extra info:
    -The map has 3 chests on every starting island.
    -Medium island distance and medium map size
    -Ore is underground in starting islands (not too much though).
    5 chests are at mid but one is hidden in plain sight (designed to combat the OP play style of looting mid which is an ez win).
    -The waterlogged blocks allow for players to travel at the same speed as on land although does not allow for jumping. This will make strategical use of your location and the enemies location a factor and strategy in PVP combat.
    Images of the map:
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    Last edited: Jun 24, 2020
  2. Alairina

    Alairina Notable Member

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    chrysos Notable Member

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    It looks great! I’d love for this to be added
     
  4. B3N

    B3N Notable Member Emerald Member

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    Looks good! I think the islands on the right side of the second picture are more spaced out than the islands on the left side though, but I’m not 100% sure.
     
  5. SplashingPaint836

    SplashingPaint836 Notable Member

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    ^ It looks a bit wonky on some islands but overall good job Marvel!
     
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  6. MarvelB0i

    MarvelB0i Notable Member

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    I checked and it’s a two block distance in terms of 3 islands being slightly off. It shouldn’t affect gameplay very much so I am not worried. Plus it’s distance to mid where it’s two blocks off so you could just e pearl. Thanks for telling me :D
     
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  7. DarkTdmPlays

    DarkTdmPlays 〖 Brokenlens Staff 〗 Sectional Moderator

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    It has some really nice patterns and ideas but it just seems a bit clunky and the center island looks too small on the edges. The spawn islands are also straight copy and paste with them all being the same thing, some more effort and variety in that department would really help this map. All in all nice work! :)
     
  8. MarvelB0i

    MarvelB0i Notable Member

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    Is it still good enough for it to be accepted onto the server? You said nice work but I am worried it isn’t good enough. Editing the spawn islands would be tough due to the fact that I would either have to destroy some to add new ones in or manually edit some. I am considering doing slight edits to mid however. Thanks for feedback :D
     
  9. Sphynxx

    Sphynxx Notable Member Emerald Member

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    This map is really great! I love the style! GJ
     
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    DarkTdmPlays 〖 Brokenlens Staff 〗 Sectional Moderator

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    I'm not a builder so idk xD
    They can give you more advice
     
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    LiteBoy90 Notable Member Emerald Member

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    Eriell Notable Member Emerald Member

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    #Bopl4Builder
     
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  13. MarvelB0i

    MarvelB0i Notable Member

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    I built this map not BopI?
    I am c o n f u s e d b0i
     
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    Lagg Notable Member Diamond Member

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    @AllyMac_ maybe u missed this submission so im tagging u-
     
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    Haroldwp Notable Member Emerald Member

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    It looks really cute but there are a few small problems:

    The islands are covered in water. Sorry but it would be sorta hard to pvp on those islands ;/ please make those areas covered with blocks that look like water :) oh yeah its called spiral pool

    As Dark said, the islands should look a bit different from each other, with more shape.

    And I will think of more tomorrow.

    Other than that, excellent work!
     
  17. AllyMac_

    AllyMac_ ❤Brokenlens Builder❤ Build Team Captain Builder

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    I didn't miss it- thanks Vini ;)
     
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  18. MarvelB0i

    MarvelB0i Notable Member

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    The water is half a block tall so the only thing u can’t do in it is jump. You still move at the same speed when sprinting as I said in the main post
     
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  19. MarvelB0i

    MarvelB0i Notable Member

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    Everyone I made some edits to the map! Some islands are slightly different now! Here is the download link for the updated map! Hopefully I submitted the link right! If not could someone make the download link correct? :D
    The middle islands per every row of three islands have lanterns hanging from their different overhang
     

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    yeah, it’s looks better! :p
     
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