Movie Studio: Update I (MM)

Discussion in 'Map Submission' started by mewmore, Mar 26, 2020 at 3:35 AM.

  1. mewmore

    mewmore Notable Member Emerald Member

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    Hello again, this post is merely just an update from the last one. I’m building this map to be a Murder Mystery Map <3.

    Here’s what I’ve added:
    - A more detailed road
    - detailed offices
    - a water tower
    - more color!
    - more hiding spots
    - actual offices inside
    - a carpark
    - a construction side (under construction oops)

    What has yet to be added:
    - more greenery
    - finish the background
    - a bit more color
    - more lighting
    - few more hiding spots
    - finish the construction site
    - a big boi crane
    - how about a helicopter?

    If anyone has any suggestions for this map, don’t be afraid to tell me!

    Ash-
     

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    G0rtqMxllen Notable Member Emerald Member

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    Eh, I'd detail the buildings, those lamps hanging from glass blocks looks a bit stupid to me
     
  3. TheRealOne

    TheRealOne Notable Member Emerald Member

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    maybe add some camera equipment around,and put vehicles?

    and maybe attatch the lamps to the buildings
     
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    viniu Notable Member

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    You should do an light pole instead of these flying lamps
     
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    UpsideDxwn Notable Member Emerald Member

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    I'd add detail to the building sides like- windows? And also maybe some cracks in the walls using stairs. Overall nice map so far, I like the interiors.
     
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    So far it’s looking really good, hope it gets added when finished. I don’t have any suggestions yet, but if I do I’ll respond ASAP
     
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    unworthy Notable Member Emerald Member

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    Maybe add a mix of birch wood and other creamy colours to the buildings? They look really flat to me. And on the massive black screens add a mix of concrete powder, wool etc. Just to add texture (and the roof). And with the hanging lights maybe add Fences connecting them to a building or just a pole as lights don’t float. Also recommend adding a tunnel system if you haven’t already. Other than that it looks amazing
     
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    zVenus Notable Member Emerald Member

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    Maybe make those lights a light pole or attached those floating lamps to the buildings using fences and those walls looks bland/plain to me tho. Maybe add details to it. For the roof it looks nice but would recommend to mix in some stone bricks or something.

    I love the cars! They look soo cute ^^.
    For this one:
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    It looks empty to me, put some texture in the dirt and maybe some buttons for rocks. Logs tied down with railings. Just something to make it more lively. (Would love it o
    If that's a playground xD).

    Nice idea and I really love it! Just little more improvement and it will look good! I love the pillars for the entrance.
     
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