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Discussion in 'General Discussion' started by DarkTdmPlays, Mar 13, 2019.

  1. DarkTdmPlays

    DarkTdmPlays ♤ Brokenlens Staff ♤ Helper

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    I made this yesterday because I was bored. Its simple but I like it.

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    xMarshmello Active Member

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    That’s amazing! :O
     
  3. DarkTdmPlays

    DarkTdmPlays ♤ Brokenlens Staff ♤ Helper

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    I also made this banner...
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    DarkTdmPlays ♤ Brokenlens Staff ♤ Helper

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    Thank you :D. Trying to make myself feel like I'm doing something
     
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    Anmo Notable Member

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    I like it, but there are some things I think would make this better.

    Focus Point
    The banner has 5 things on screen:
    • Minigame icons
    • Vertx
    • Logo
    • Player models
    • Background
    All of these are fighting for your attention with saturated colors. You need some heirarchy to portray the most important part of the picture. The logo appears most important, so make that bigger than most of the other objects. The player models appear out of place because they don't relate to the objects on the banner, so we can replace them with something that fits or remove them.

    Now the colors. The background is very saturated, much like the icons. Making it monochrome or dulling the colors may prevent it from veering the eye away from important details.

    *The composition might have to change because the logo is pretty long.
    That's all I think the banner might need to improve upon. I typically like the composition of the icons and logo. I also like the background choice, though it may seem more fitting to use a picture of the lobby. Now, how do I end a long reply?
     
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    DarkTdmPlays ♤ Brokenlens Staff ♤ Helper

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    K thank you
     
  10. Lied

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    It's alright
     
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    What's app did you use
     
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    mh yeah it's average, I mean you just slapped the logo on some random ♥♥♥ minecraft background you found on google and same with the other one +the stupid looking icons and random ♥♥♥ dudes.
    anybody could do that tbh.
    -elina
     
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    DarkTdmPlays ♤ Brokenlens Staff ♤ Helper

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    You do it :mrgreen:
     
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    typi Notable Member

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    i will but i kinda suck at it and i probably shouldn't be replying to this
    -typi
     
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    DarkTdmPlays ♤ Brokenlens Staff ♤ Helper

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    Yea you shouldn't. Be nice.
     
  18. typi

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    oh I freaking can hun, just not @ 1 am
    -elina
     
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    DarkTdmPlays ♤ Brokenlens Staff ♤ Helper

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    Slap happy xd
     
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    she's nice what are you freaking talking about -elina
     

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